Topic: Some people think that it is necessary to travel abroad to learn about other countries. However, other people think that it is not necessary to travel abroad because all the information can be seen at TV and the Internet. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion.
The past 20 years have witnessed a remarkable increase in the demand of widening knowledge as well as acquiring information, especially about other cultures. While the trend of travelling overseas for experience becomes increasingly popular, some people hold the idea of updating just through sitting in front of the screens. This essay will give a debate on this issue together with personal point of view.
On the one hand, taking advantage of technology to gain knowledge is not a bad idea. Firstly, with the advancement of high-tech as 3G or wi-fi, people now can easily access to wherever they want with just a “click”. All the articles, videos, images about not only cultures but also history and development will appear in a second, without mentioning that it is totally free and convenient. In addition, it is a fact that not everyone can afford a visit to other countries so modern devices are the only tools rendering their thirst for knowledge fulfilled.
However, no one can deny that travelling overseas is a much more appealing option. The primary benefit is that people will stance a chance of experiencing the real life of local people as well as being embedded in their cultures through stories telling or activities participating. Therefore, comprehensive understanding is a huge achievement because sometimes, visitors may find what they see totally distinct from what has been broadcast and publicized. Moreover, it is deemed worth the costly expenditure of travelling thanks to truly sightseeing with a promise of bringing tourists about a whale of time.
All things considered, there are still a variety of different perspectives on the question of whether travelling or just using TV and Internet. From my perspective, it would be much better if people have a chance to go overseas and enjoy themselves.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: an
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Suggestion: stories'; story's
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Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; the question whether
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ce to go overseas and enjoy themselves.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, still, therefore, well, while, as for, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1544.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18120805369 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0416015567 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624161073826 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8203476746 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.769230769 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9230769231 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92307692308 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193751130627 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.058562013012 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0365296351903 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111118067615 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0242916496636 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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