Tourism is an overly profitable industry. However, many believe that it only worsens the country. Discuss two points of view and give your opinion.
Nowadays, few have apprehensions about the fact that tourism is, in fact, a multifaceted, extremely profitable industry. Nevertheless, its influence on culture remains a source of constant debate. In this article, both the positive and negative consequences of tourism from a cultural point of view will be considered in detail. Furthermore, developing the economic composition of the homeland to protect culture is indubitably one of the pre-eminent contributions of tourism. Logically speaking, tourists as regard fundamentally accentuate antiquity and culture. it follows that the income received from tourists can be directed to the perpetuation and reinforce historical attractions in the country. In expanding, tourism can make local cultures known around the earth and thus generate support around the world for its protection. When a historical place or a place that shows the country's cultural patrimony becomes obtainable to the crowds, visitors from all over the world will soon gather there. Returning dwelling-place, they will allotment their experiences in their home countries with their families, and this will help to do world fame. both monetary and mechanical help will be directed towards the keeping of common and cultural resources. Meanwhile, tourism amplifies sometimes due to culture as a whole. Nourishment, festivals, costumes and other exciting factors of culture are designed to satisfy tourists, annoying the locals and damaging the unusual nature of culture. Summing up, it can be concluded that tourism is neither an advantage nor a curse to preserve background. Although he craves to defend the dignity of the indigenous population needs to be acknowledged, it threatens the honesty of the culture.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... cultural resources. Meanwhile, tourism amplifies sometimes due to culture as a whole. Nourishment,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, nevertheless, so, thus, well, while, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1472.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61832061069 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14065320936 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62213740458 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.936406134 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.142857143 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7142857143 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.093746597048 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.031726092362 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0355017078611 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.093746597048 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.25 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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