Traditions are about the past and innovation is about the future, and it has been argued that we need to let go of traditions for the sake of progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this? What role should traditions have in our lives?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Traditions and innovations are two inevitable and highly integrated part of human civlizations. Many people in the modern world emphasise on innovations abandoning traditions to become progressive for addressing the issues that were existed. I completely agree that innovation and progress should be taken into account over the traditions. While, it is undeniable that traditions and culture are integral part of our daily life and provide the basis for our future.
To begin with, innovations and discovery are the result of intention to build our modern civilization. Since the beginning of human world, people faced challenges that were solved by finding new ideas. It is a common trait of mankind to improve and evolve from the present situation. This led them to search for and think about the new ideas that could upgrade their life, solve the existing issues and make life easier. They invented fire to cook, ship to travel, other modes of transportation to faster travel, new cooking methods, cusines, clothes, and modern day electricity, internet and computer. All those happened due to innovative approach of human civilization. Therefore, there is no way to deny the imprtance of innovation and progress for our society.
On the other hand, many people love to stick to the traditions. For instance, some people still use bicycles instead of motorised vehicles. Still many people try to be religious while others not. Therefore, always there are some gaps between old generations and new generations. Thus the arguments are created. However, traditions are unique identifier of a society.
Though, for the sake of progress, my stance is to give up of traditions. But traditions have certain important roles in the society. They help to create some values in the society that positively influence a community to be a good social being. Nevertheless, people should have freedom and choice to carry or follow the traditions. This is not something hard and fast rule that may ruin a human being.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Still,
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, thus, while, for instance, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1688.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20987654321 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84166584536 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.4594858012 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.7272727273 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7272727273 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36363636364 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219050529012 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0602529072652 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592583411261 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129613816197 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0687198525517 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.