It is, indeed, true that as the human population is increasing, many cities and states are facing issues related to housing and congestion. Hence, a growing number of social experts deem that local authorities ought to transfer the business accommodations to suburb areas from metro areas. This essay will shed more light on the merits and demerits of this phenomenon. In the end, I will also compare them.
On the one hand, moving the running business to the outskirts has some benefits to society. The first and predominant one is, it will create some more housing space for urban dwellers. In simple terms, these days, it can be seen that in some metro cities, a large number of the building are commercial buildings or some business headquarters. For example, in New York, 57% of buildings are using by companies or small shops. However, only 40% space is for accommodation purposes. Thus, moving these buildings to rural areas will create a high amount of space for the citizens to accommodate. Furthermore, it might help the government to lower the cost of real estate in the cities.
Moreover, it will help the local bodies and legislators to curb the issue of traffic. To explain it, if these shops and business will move to suburb areas the employees and customer will travel more to those areas, which eventually create less traffic in the city centres.
On the other side, this situation also has some drawbacks to the environment. To exemplify, it is true that the outskirts of any cities have more greeneries, and it also a habitat of many animals. Therefore, moving these businesses to rural areas will affect the environment badly by chopping down the trees for huge skyscrapers.
To conclude, although shifting business and shops to the rural area has some negatives effects on the environment, the positives such as less traffic in cities and more accommodation space outnumber the negatives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1559.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.871875 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61536737082 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496875 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 320.0 20.2975951904 1577% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1559.0 106.682146367 1461% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 320.0 20.7667163134 1541% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 115.0 7.06120827912 1629% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278329769584 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.278329769584 0.084324248473 330% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16175140052 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312429835643 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 161.5 13.0946893788 1233% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -253.32 50.2224549098 -504% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 128.1 11.3001002004 1134% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.45 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 23.01 8.58950901804 268% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 56.0 9.78957915832 572% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 130.0 10.1190380762 1285% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 130.0 10.7795591182 1206% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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