Traffic and accommodation problems are increasing and government should encourage some businesses to move from cities to rural areas. Does advantage outweigh the disadvantages?
In this day and age, traffic and accommodation issues becoming increasingly crucial and some people believe that some companies should be transferred their business from urban areas to rural areas. Although this may bring several downsides for economic growth, the advantages are highly greater.
On the one hand, there are several positive that moving companies partly out of urban areas. In fact, more and more companies move their business to countryside areas will create more jobs for the local workforce. Therefore, people in rural areas would not enter cities in order to find a job anymore and thereby reducing pressure on housing demands and traffic problems. The further advantage of this trend is that reduce the gap between the rich and the poor as stimulating the economy of the countryside.
Besides, moving industrial companies out of the cities is a perfect solution to prevent environmental degradation such as cutting down emissions and stop discharging chemical waste into rivers.
On the other hand, there are still disadvantages people need to consider. First, the enterprises that transfer their companies to rural areas might be struggled by several risks such as weather, distance issues, and supply sources. This would inevitably lead to increasing business operating expenses and cut down their profitability. The other drawback of this trend is the lack of white-collar workers in the village. Most of rural dwellers do not receive a sufficient education to undertake intellectual jobs.
In conclusion, although moving some companies from urban areas to rural areas might come at a cost, the advantages still outweigh the disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 36, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'positives'?
Suggestion: positives
.... On the one hand, there are several positive that moving companies partly out of urb...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, may, so, still, therefore, well, as to, in conclusion, in fact, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1416.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44615384615 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84708924338 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569230769231 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5637452831 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.923076923 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.15384615385 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260210513657 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0799754867415 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0787870968628 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144293526084 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0762031070497 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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