Traffic and housing problems in major cities could be solved by moving large companies and factories and employees to the countryside. To what extent to you agree or disagree.
Time is altering and so is the paramount significance of addressing the problems of traffic as well as accommodation the world over. It is argued by many that the practice of moving enormous companies and their employees to out skirt of cities positively influence the traffic and housing, two severe problems in major cities. Throughout the following paragraphs, these points will be meticulously scrutinized to rationally uphold this convincing standpoint.
Never can it be denied that accommodation is a problem concern in metropolitans which is firmly interwoven with overpopulation, for one. Meaning that, in the event of a considerable number of people move to suburbs for their jobs, urban populations and the problem of housing will automatically decline. Take Tehran as a metropolis with many big factories and companies in which, as an example. Should officials ban factories to work in the heart of the city and oblige them to provide facilities for their employees to accommodate out of the city to work there, many houses will be empty and available to use. By this, people seeking for a suitable house in city can easily find one, additionally, the price of houses will reduce. This example clearly shows that by forcing big companies and factories to move to countryside the housing problem can be overcome to a great extent.
Equally important, without a shadow of a doubt, moving factories and their employees out of big cities can be considered as a remedy which directly influence the reduction of traffic. It is conspicuous that people in metropolitan experience heavy traffic the time they rushing to their workplaces or back from. In the aforementioned instance, for example, people who have settled down in countryside to be in close distance to their working area, no longer would be a part of traffic in rush hours. As a result, there might not be a traffic congestion in that city. Thus, this practice helps to tackle traffic complication in some certain time of the day.
To recapitulate, after careful situational analysis of clear virtues of moving huge companies and their staff to suburb on overcoming traffic as well as housing problems, it deems that it has a direct impact on reducing these problems. Thus, based on the aforementioned compelling grounds, it is hoped these points will be taken into account by officials in the foreseeable future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, thus, well, for example, as a result, as well as, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1993.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 391.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09718670077 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01207335028 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516624040921 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 629.1 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1980018917 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.5625 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4375 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6875 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312338622736 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104061890893 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0704524867426 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183796814001 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0572847645162 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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