Traffic on roads has become a problem in every country in the world.
What can be done to reduce the amount of traffic at a society level and at an individual level ?
We are living in the golden age of luxurious automobiles equipped with cutting-edge technologies, along with an ever-growing population, which explain the main reason for an escalating amount of traffic, raising other concerns. Fortunately, the cooperation of both country leaders and citizens can help to alleviate the current situation.
To begin with, there are several policies in which governments could carry out to shrink down the traffic volume. Purchases of private vehicles should be heavily levied taxes upon, and the increment of road costs. Further, campaigns should be launched for propaganding and raising the awareness of the current alarming situation of the environment from large amount of traffic to the general public, stating the reason for the above measures. There should also be more government funding for the improvement of public transport systems and policies to encourage citizens to opt in for transport of this type.
Besides, the involvement of each individual in cooperating with governments’ policies is also needed to cope with the situation. Each person should be aware of the devastating effects of enormous amount of fumes emitted from an excess amount of transport to the environment, and the inconvenience of congested roads. By this way, they could also have a higher frequency of opting in for public transport, car pooling or similar mass-transport modes. Families should tighten down the number of private cars or motorbikes that they buy according to the number of members in the family, not only reducing environmental impacts but also reducing financial burden for families.
In conclusion, involvement of residents and governmets are needed to reduce the large volume of traffic on roads and solve related problems. Suitable measures and policies should be carried out and followed by every person.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, so, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1568.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46341463415 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96234056822 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574912891986 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0090963948 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.666666667 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9166666667 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157714765168 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0601826121998 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0333706723106 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105949823718 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0252915508352 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.95 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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