The UN recently celebrated its 70th anniversary.
What benefits has it brought during this time ?
do you think the UN will last another 70 years?
At the present time, the United Nations has observed its anniversary which is 70 th. This essay will first discuss the advantages of United Nations during its time and it will then clarify why UN will continue its activity in the next 70 years.
The two most important benefits that UN has brought during its activity are increasing bonding among the Nations and first response during danger. Having a good relationship among countries is simply more realistic than ever before.Moreover, burgeoning advancement of modern communication has accelerated the good alliance among the Nations.For example, during covid-19 physical attending on UN meeting was impossible all Nations; all Nations have participated in a virtual meeting because of their close relationship .In addition, another important benefit of UN that has brought its tenure is fast response during danger of any Nations either that is developed or developing . Take for an example, during mass killing of Rohihiga in Myanmar ,the UN has interfered directly.
With regards to the question of lasting of UN in the next 70 years, many people think that this is and always will be highly likely. The vast majority of Nations succeed to reach their goals with the direct and indirect aid of UN. Furthermore, without unity, no country can achieve its target without any difficulty in the global area, especially beset with many problems .A successful example is that sustainable l development goals of the nations , which will be achieved by 2030, is the target of all nations that is set by the United Nations. As all the nations are doing work with Unitedly , so it will be obtained easily.
To sum up, bonding among the Nations has increased significantly and fast response during pandemic or any other urgent necessity is noticeable than previous time. Besides, UN will be long lasting in the following days for its assistance to the member countries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, for example, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1611.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14696485623 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78234031732 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562300319489 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 129.756733611 49.4020404114 263% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 146.454545455 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4545454545 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313789403692 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133972620274 0.084324248473 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0757759168415 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196338159553 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05766096058 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.