Unemployment is one of the biggest problems of contemporary society.
What do you think are the main causes of unemployment?
What solutions can you suggest?
In the modern society, everybody needs money and this is the main reason why it is a vital to be employed. Nowadays low number of jobs has become a real problem for many countries around the world. This essay will discuss the main causes associated with this issue and propose some possible solutions to avoid them.
I strongly believe that the main reasons of unemployment are insufficient number of productions and illiteracy of the population country.
Reduction in production and closure of plants and factories is one of the main causes of cutback. Sometimes a large production, such as a car factory or an aircraft factory, can be the place of work for most of the population in a small city. For example, the reduction in the number of work places at the AvtoVAZ car factory in Tolyatti significantly affected the unemployment rate in that city. production cuts at city-forming enterprises sharply increase the number of unemployed.
Another problem is the low level of education of applicants. All well paid jobs require people with a good education. Many people can’t get a job because they don’t want to do low-skilled, low-paid work and at the same time they don’t have enough education for other more qualified work. For example, my neighbor Ben didn’t go to get education after school, now he is unemployed and receives benefits from the state. People with a good education can easily find work.
In my opinion, the best solutions to this problem are increasing production volumes and raising the level of education of citizens. Increase in volumes allows factories to create a large number of new jobs. For example, the opening of new factories in Kaluga made it possible to open many new vacancies for local residents. I think that the other good idea is create various programs to make education more accessible to people. For example, in Africa, with an increase in the number of educated people, the unemployment rate began to decline.
In conclusion, it can be said that one of the biggest problems of modern society is unemployment. In my opinion, the best solutions to this problem are creating enough jobs and affordable education.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 398, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Production
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Line 9, column 180, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...e in volumes allows factories to create a large number of new jobs. For example, the opening of n...
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Line 9, column 361, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'created'.
Suggestion: created
...ts. I think that the other good idea is create various programs to make education more...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1825.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04143646409 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85611447325 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491712707182 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 583.2 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1126486407 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.25 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.65 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153763413109 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0504649918419 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394916404396 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.090984135658 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318178573627 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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