In the last decade, gender equality at workplace, in social system or in educational institutional become the hot topic of debate. Generally, one can find male or female dominating courses in all universities and higher educational institutions. Some people believe that university should encourage gender equality while opening admission to the various courses and I completely agree to the above mention statement and can provide various salutary effects on country and society. Following passages will prove my viewpoints.
Firstly, when same number of male and females will get enrolled in any specific subject that will help in breaking the glass ceiling. In country like India, for example, have majority of male heads who are running the organizations. Due to stereotype, girls are not opting certain subjects such as civil, mechanical or marketing which result in lesser competition for male candidate and they become a preferred choice for the organizations. which means even after putting her best foot forward, female must face miserable position in the education and social system.
In addition to above, some males want to study subjects such as cookery, but society does not accept such males and they have to face criticism. To illustrate the same, we can look at the difference between developed and developing nations. In developed nation, such as, Australia boys are also opting female dominating courses like cookery, child care etc which help in building an empowered economy from male and female perspective and a nation can grow at a faster pace.
To sum up, I reckon that giving equal opportunity to both gender in all subject through awareness campaigns and counselling sessions will help in building different kind of diverse yet united nation and society.
- Many government think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 67
- Nowadays not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries What are the reasons for this problem What are the effects on the society 93
- Universities should accept equal number of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree. 89
- Most countries want to improve the standard of living through economic development, however, others think the social value is lost as a result. Do you think the advantages of economic development outweigh the disadvantages? 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 442, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Which
...preferred choice for the organizations. which means even after putting her best foot ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, so, while, for example, i reckon, in addition, kind of, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1508.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32862190813 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76769364408 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621908127208 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.9297347367 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.666666667 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5833333333 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19350532904 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0631037949946 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443751863169 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103852736783 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0314590925503 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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