Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject.
To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Education is the basic necessity of life and every man and woman should seek knowledge in order to gain access to the path towards success. Education of an individual start from the time he comes to this world to the time he eventually leaves it.
Women have been working in every field of life along side men which shows their competency and ability in every field as men and without their full authority in the same field as men the desired success cannot be achieved. As the saying goes; "Behind every mans success their is a woman".
With the evaluation of the idea of limiting a woman's capabilities to house hold chores and the recent researches about women being more competitive and hardworking than men makes me confident that the educational bodies should give females the same number of seats as men in every subject.
For instance, some countries like pakistan and afghanistan when availed the opportunity for females to study in becoming aeroplane pilots in equal number as males, their success rate in flights was more as compare to men.
A recent study showed that the different hormones of the females body make them more sharp and intelligent than men. This shows that women are not only competitive as men but also more efficient in their work. This is one of the other supporting idea in relation to the subject.
The above reasons make me confident over the idea that female students should be given equal number of opportunity in the same subjects as men.
- It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents,for instance for sport and music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.Discuss both these views 76
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1245.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86328125 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52579164087 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5390625 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.5966234813 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.5 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.1 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143906913825 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621328617229 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05883719105 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0880898067039 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0601679110064 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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