University students often focus on one subject. However,some people think that universities should encourage students to learn a range of other subjects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
College students often target on one subject. Despite,few community assume that colleges should boost students to determine a range of other subjects. There are arguments boths in favour and against students to learn a range of subjects at university,which I would write before arriving at a meaningful conclusion.
Students who are against of targeting to learn a dimension of more subjects give reasons to modify their learning ability. Firstly,it could be occur when student focus only on the subject which they would liked the most. Secondly,apart from one subject they put less effort towards remaining subjects. Thirdly,targeting one subject and poor determination on other subject can lead minimise of grade on academic year. Therefore,such difficult situations are not suitable for students in university.
However,i believe that student have rights to education and learn a range of more subjects during college hours. To begin with,to learn a determine of more subjects will helps to develop skills and knowledge amongs that subject. Moreover,it guidance to acquire more and more knowledge which,students can use in their future. In addition,by focusing on all subjects will give high result of academic and get chances to join multinational companies for job.
To sum up,targeting on familiar subjects could help when students put sufficient efforts. Otherwise,it will be no use. So,try to gain knowledge from all subjects in academic hours at university,which helps in upcoming years and fulfill their aim easily.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, apart from, in addition, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1301.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 234.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55982905983 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11906387034 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581196581197 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.9137593653 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.7333333333 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.13333333333 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260103370111 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102005015294 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0704500398932 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173416564366 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0813163799554 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.67 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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