Many people are afraid to leave their home because of crime. Some believe that more action should be taken to prevent crime. While others feel that little action can be done to stop crime. What is your view?
Most humans are frightened to leave their family because of violation. Few assume that many activity should be taken to stop violation. While others feel that limited activity can be done to stop violation. I personally believe that corruption creates a problem in today’s culture and authority of the nation should take steps among gangsters.
To begin with,in present days violation has been risen up for the community. Firstly,this misconduct makes a negative effect towards each person of the society. Secondly,humans are anxious to leave their house because of any offender would like do wrong action with them. Thirdly,in this corruptions the gangsters mostly target on females of the society. For an instance,when girls leave their household for the schools and colleges, the criminals will mark for antisocial behaviour and burglary. By this each gender get frightened to leave their family for any culture program,wedding functions or any friends birthday party.
Moreover,the government of the nation should take steps towards these violation activities. So,people can live freely in their life. If authority helps to secure community,then all types of crimes would decline. Crimes is increasing day by day instead of declining, despite government should be focus among violations. In addition,limited force cannot work from the government side to prevent violation,while they should take full charge among gangsters. So,families could leave with freedom.
To sum up, crime is an offence against the law and done by backward peoples who are seeking to earn money and sometimes rich people can also hire some goons and make them do criminal activities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, while, in addition, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50387596899 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9817565197 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.639534883721 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.5963194263 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.5294117647 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1764705882 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.29411764706 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280769263673 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797500883215 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726707793038 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157654586203 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0670489068618 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.03 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.