The unlimited use of cars may cause many problems. What are those problem? .In order to reduce the problem, should we discourage people to use car
Owning cars are an crucial part in our daily life. It offers many utilities to our life, and it also provides access to many far away places that could take hours to arrive on foot. However, a range of issues have been witnessed and need to be addressed.
The problems associated with frequent car use are becoming increasingly prominent to the public. Vehicles are the major sources of polution and green house gas emissions. Globle warming,acid rain and the rising sea level are caused worse by the usage of cars, which also affects the heath and well-being of people. Futhermore, traffic jam is made much worse due to the rising rate of people, who prefers to drive rather than walk or cycle. There are constant jams during rush hours. The most serious problem,however,is safety. The number of car accidents is rising every year,thus cause many deaths and casualties.
To resovle these pressing problems, some people suggest the goverment imposes a strict restriction on the use of cars,but i do not believe this is the best option because this could greatly reduce the mobility for people and crash the car industy. To solve this issue, it is clearly seen that car manufactures ought to boost the production of eco-friendly cars, which operate on solar or wind power.Also, traffic problems can be alleviate by constructing more underground tunnels and parking lots, and safety issues can be avoided by educating drivers about the dangers on the road.
To sum up, i personally think reducing the use and production of cars is a quick solution, however, improving the current infastructure is maybe a permanent cure.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'thus', 'well', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.263843648208 0.247107183377 107% => OK
Verbs: 0.188925081433 0.155533422707 121% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0814332247557 0.0946595960268 86% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0586319218241 0.0501214627716 117% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0162866449511 0.0437548338989 37% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0781758957655 0.122226691241 64% => OK
Participles: 0.0684039087948 0.0403226058552 170% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.73667924144 2.80594681477 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0358306188925 0.0326793684256 110% => OK
Particles: 0.00325732899023 0.00163938923432 199% => OK
Determiners: 0.0977198697068 0.0861772015684 113% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0162866449511 0.021408717616 76% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0130293159609 0.011925033212 109% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1626.0 1933.35771543 84% => OK
No of words: 271.0 316.048096192 86% => OK
Chars per words: 6.0 6.12580529183 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20517956788 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.354243542435 0.374742101984 95% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.261992619926 0.28420135186 92% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.169741697417 0.203846283523 83% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.114391143911 0.137316102897 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73667924144 2.80594681477 98% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.037074148 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653136531365 0.56093040696 116% => OK
Word variations: 76.4429361112 60.7387585426 126% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0891783567 81% => OK
Sentence length: 20.8461538462 20.7743622355 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 81.9761113998 49.517814964 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.076923077 127.492653851 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8461538462 20.7743622355 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.692307692308 0.814263465372 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 3.99599198397 175% => OK
Readability: 47.0454158388 49.1944974215 96% => OK
Elegance: 1.55555555556 1.69124875643 92% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.415910632281 0.332605444948 125% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.093880513648 0.102741220458 91% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0601556799653 0.0668466124924 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.551258429426 0.534860350844 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.217306879114 0.148594505496 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161632003967 0.134430193775 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0779326905374 0.0742795772207 105% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.295496365813 0.324371583561 91% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.1077860675 0.0638462369009 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.257230322336 0.228012699653 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0773685069491 0.058150111329 133% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.68436873747 35% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.41683366733 146% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 5.90881763527 34% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.5751503006 155% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 10.4468937876 77% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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