The unlimited use of cars may cause many problems. What are those problems? In order to reduce the problems should we discourage pEople to use cars.
having a car nowadays means more accessible and more proactively in daily life. however, the more cars are being used, the more problems associated with that.
there are many problems need to be clearly examinated, and one of those is safety issue. Several reports related to the death caused by car accidents have been recorded throughout the world each year, and the number is tremendous. More than 1 million death in the road crashes per year with the average around 3000 deaths a day. Despite the issue of people’s safety, the use of cars also brings concern about environmental matter. Due to the fact that cars produce a considerable amount of exhaust fume, which is the root that leads to air pollution in many big cities such as Beijing and Shanghai. it has become one of the unfriendly device to the environment in the eyes of variety environmentalists, citizens or governments. Another minor issue originating from the unrestricted use of cars that contributes to the air pollution problem is the traffic jam. During rush hours in big cities like New York or Manhattan, the huge flow of transportations has resulted in the heavy traffic jams. Additionally, more emision is being emitted in the air, polluting the air.
Solving those problems is not an easy matter. some deems that by encourage people to use less cars. that is a good point however, it is not practical since human depends mostly on cars to travel either for daily or work, so it is hard to restrict the car use everyday. there still are many other solutions. By manufacturing cars that are friendly to the environment like electricity cars, the amount of emission can be reduced, and the problems can be settled to some extension. Moreover, governments can build more infrastructures as underground tunnels or roads so as to decrease the amount of traffic jams. safety issue about car driving shall be taken more seriously before actually licensing any driving license by the governments.
In conclusion, I think that there are three problems contribute to overuse of the cars, and those can be handled by three solutions rather than just discouraging the use of car.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, moreover, so, still, as to, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1797.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96408839779 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86976690713 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552486187845 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 565.2 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5292469026 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5789473684 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0526315789 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.89473684211 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259396780253 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0814711499448 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0714095566018 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168786817944 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056406183366 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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