The use of social media is replacing face-to-face interaction among many people in society. Do you think the disadvatage outweight advantage?
Nowadays, there are a lot of people who are really keen on using social media to contact with other people, instead of facing with them in society because they can find the benefits of social media. In my opinion, using them to keep in touch with the others has more advantages than disadvantages. And this essay, I will give some reason for my view.
First of all, thanks to social medial, we can contact with other people easily, who are extremely far from with us, needn't so much time and money. if you have a friend whose distace is about 100km, it is better for you to call video with her/him and by this way, you aslo can see your friend and talk with them as facing. Moreover, after sressful works, I am sure that nobody is intersted in going out to meet someone and a great solution is sitting down on sofa and chatting with them by useful apps like facebook, instagram,....By this way, you not only feel more comfortable but also get on well with their friends.
I agree that replacing face-to-face interaction among people by using social media also has disadvantages because people can feel more close than when talking by media. On the contrary, meeting others or gathering them in a restaurant or cafe has many trobles, especiallyin virus Covid-19. In these places, you can be in dangerous because you can meet a crime. However, the use of social media can solve these problems. By some apps you can gather people in a private room and you needn't be scare of being lost. In addition, it can prevent you or your friends from being accidents. It is so terrible if you get a car crash when you are meeting your friends. Moreover, in dangerous sititcation because of Covid 19, by using social media, you can practise tactical 5K of goverments.
In my view,we should use them to keep in touch with our friends because of its usefulness. and I can say that social media becomes more and more popular with people in all over the world instead of facing-to-facing interaction among people
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, really, so, well, in addition, first of all, in my opinion, in my view, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 24.0651302605 199% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1641.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6095505618 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52956729614 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516853932584 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.9069046533 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.5625 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301536368696 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111115790375 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108189498869 0.0667982634062 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203043343475 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0800706365398 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.