The use of social media is replacing face-to-face interaction among many people in society. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Recently, face-to-face communication has been replaced by using social media such as Facebook, Zalo or Instagram. Some people consider that teenagers should use them instead of going out as it will bring us many benefits, whereas another group of people think it is a negative way to destroy the future. As I will explain below, I strongly believe that this will negatively affect our lives.
On the one hand, social networks make it easy for us to keep in touch with our relatives. By using Facebook, Skype, or other social media, students studying abroad can reconnect with their families and friends. The digital generation allows students and workers to work and study without interrupting each other. Due to the Covid-19 pandemic, social media became extremely familiar to everyone because people could not go outside. In addition, it can help prevent us from getting infected with viruses in the future.
The frequent use of social media, however, affects the way people speak and write. Many young people have a habit of using teen code instead of normal words, resulting in a lack of words when writing academic essays or formal writing. Overuse of social media can adversely affect interpersonal skills as well. People are so addicted to their phones that they never even pay attention to the people around them while they are eating dinner with their families.
In conclusion, personally, I believe that when it comes to communication, social media does more harm than good for the reasons I mentioned above.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 388, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding people'?
Suggestion: the surrounding people
...s that they never even pay attention to the people around them while they are eating dinner with their...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, well, whereas, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1277.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08764940239 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56672050638 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.641434262948 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1001707212 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2307692308 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3076923077 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38461538462 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254504408045 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0864140313679 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0827032152003 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140407023079 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0703984735955 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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