The users of social media like facebook or twitter are replacing face to face contact to this century. Do you think its advantages are outweighed by its disadvantages?
In contemporary society, social means become the most essential element of daily life. However, people assume that virtual contact is gradually substituting verbal communication. In my opinion, this phenomenon has more drawbacks than benefits.
It is no doubt that Facebook or twitter brings some advantages to people. First of all, it eliminates the geological barrier. People can communicate with each other even they are in different countries. Moreover, these applications not only support people chat with friends but also make a video call to abbreviate the distance among people. In addition, social media provide the information to people to help them approach what they need in a short time. With the rapid development of these means, the news is updated on facebook and twitter. For example, the enterprises or business choose facebook which is the main means to advertise their products.
On the other hand, there are many disadvantages from utilizing social media as major devices to correspond. First and foremost, people abuse public media will be suffered from the lack of practical communication. This issue could be witnessed in a coffee shop, people ignore everything surround them because they cannot resist the appealing of a phone screen. Furthermore, it facilitates the laziness of people because the messages can be sent to their mates through a simple button. As a result, it triggers many chronic illnesses to physical like eye diseases, obesity, and nervous breakdown. For example, the radiation like of screen makes people suffer from myopia or hyperopia.
In conclusion, although people gain plus points from social media, it cannot deny that the negative aspects outweigh the advantages. Therefore, people should have more face to face exchange instead of using social media at home.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, as a result, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1539.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78146262212 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642105263158 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.9069874672 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.5 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8333333333 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.94444444444 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169183333826 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0493314172118 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478086776655 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102053963315 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0470466089235 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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