The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created a problem that did not exist before.
What are the most serious problems associated with the internet what solutions can you suggest
The proliferation of the internet provides people with various benefits nowadays. There is no doubt that without the internet people hard to update the information. In this essay, I would like to declare some disadvantages and suggest some solutions to minimize those consequences.
The first problem of the internet is that causes an addiction to people. Accommodating to searching the information, it brings many entertaining services like video games, movies, and social media. In reality, especially in students, they cannot resist the appealing of the game online. Moreover, this is not only happening to students but also to adults. Some people go home after the workday. Hardly do they stick their eyes to screen to play the video game or check social means. One possible way to overcome this situation is that people should participate in some activities or sports after work or session instead of being enamored by the virtual world.
Another consequence of the internet is affecting vision or eye-sights. There are some people who spend almost their time to surf the internet by utilizing many distinctive devices including computers and Smartphone. They spend long hours in front of the screen and it cannot deny that this severely harms their eyesight. It triggers many eyes diseases such as myopia, hyperopia, and dry eye. In the relationship with this problem, everyone should have an appropriate division between working and relaxing. Additionally, food with vitamins A should be consumed to enhance the vision.
In conclusion, although the internet has bad influences containing addiction and eyes sickness, people cannot deny the advantages which it gives to the community. Therefore, people should balance their job and amusements as well as eat some foods have vitamins A to assist them to maximize the ability of the internet.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1564.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31972789116 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83097017848 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591836734694 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.9582680905 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.8888888889 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38888888889 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128336881521 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0434482439301 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.043300224085 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0844061848458 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.023914425283 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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