Vehicle free day private cars trucks and motorcycles are banned in the City centre while the public transfer is permitted such as a bicycle bus and access to the benefits of vehicles free day outweigh the disadvantages?
These days, there are many nations, where the people already face the pollution barriers, therefore vehicle-free day is a good initiative. On this day, only the government transportation would be allowed, while the personal vehicles should be banned. If asked, I certainly believe that it has more fruitful outcome than its drawbacks.
There are several brnefits of celebrating vehicle- free day. Firstly, it might be helpful to overcome pollution hurdles. What I mean to say by this is that, if private vehicles are not allowed in city area, then the volume of vehicles would be lesser, it is proven that, the number of vehicles on the roads would be lesser, emission of toxic gases would be reduced. As a result, the pollution level might be declined. In the USA, the environmental scientist notice 23% less emission of greenhouse gases on the vehicle-free day.
Furthermore, it would be reduced the noise pollution. By this I mean, in millennium days, there are numbers of people, who hear excessive noise of vehicles than the prescribed level, it might be created ear problems, such as loss of hearing power. On the vehicle- free day, the number of vehicles on the road would be lesser, as the noise pollution may be reduced. In India, the regime banned the personal vehicle in the city centers, where roads are too narrow, after the implementation, the proportion of noise pollution was fall by 12%.
On the other hand, private vehicle-free day could be created many barriers. To begin with, the people time might be wasted. In other words, public transportation takes longer time to reach particular destination than the personal vehicles, and in today's fast pace life people cannot afford to waste their time, because they have to do more work in a short time. In the British, according to one survey, more than 50% of Britisher refused the idea of vehicle-free day, due to wasting of time in travelling.
In conclusion, I reiterate that there are several benefits of vehicle-free day, as it would be beneficial to reduce environment and noise pollution, however it has drawback as well, such as wasting of time in travelling.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, well, while, i mean, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in other words, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1788.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99441340782 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81312514943 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508379888268 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 559.8 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 8.0 2.10420841683 380% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 4.76152304609 273% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.6915830457 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.176470588 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0588235294 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2352941176 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271707319457 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109241580549 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0945479798677 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178355650945 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.021011773395 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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