Violence in media promotes violence in society. To what extent do you agree?
It is generally believed that aggressive contents in social media, namely television, youtube, facebook are more likely to encourage the rate of violence in the community having a sign of increase recently. In my opinion, I totally agree with this opinion.
Unsuitable contents on television channels are blamed for causing violence in society, which has become phenomenal. Many youngsters are prone to be influenced psychologically by what related to aggression, violence when watching offensive movies. Those students who are born in the environment with parents’ carelessness, for instance, have a tendency to bully other classmates in the weak positions because of not being restricted aggressive exposure by their parents. Even this has been more likely to become worse in some context, it is easy for young-aged students to turn to crime and commit some illegal activities, eventually they take responsibility for what they have done by serving a prison sentence. Therefore, it would be in need of placing this social phenomenon under strict management.
Apart from the practical concerns expressed above, I am also of the opinion that content moderation should be taken into consideration to be a top of priority in the list of actions carried out. The legislative branch have a role of enacting and enforcing laws and regulations controlling those shown in the theater, online as well as TV channels to ensure that the level of unhealthy contents could be acceptable. In the other words, the immature adolescents avoid being encountered scenes that are vicious, murderous and brutal. There has been a spread of crime and an increasing rate of delinquency in many countries if those unsuitable contents are not restrained strictly. Therefore, it is witnessed to be crucial to keep the number of violent scenes under control.
In conclusion, it seems to me that it would be necessary for national authority to have a zero tolerance policy for those who have not abided by the law about aggressive scenes shown in media to help citizens resist mental influences.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 236, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...help citizens resist mental influences.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore, well, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1754.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28313253012 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00785853194 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590361445783 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 570.6 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.2465987284 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.923076923 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5384615385 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0992268703039 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0383960765942 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540889737949 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0651573699317 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0534727025093 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.3 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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