The use of violence in music lyrics, video games, and films seen by children is causing concern in many societies.
What problems may be caused by this type of violent imagery, and what steps could be taken to lessen the impact on young people?
The world of entertainment nowadays begins to revolve around the most sensitive contents, one of them is about discriminating against the norms in society. In particular, more than a few of the lyrics in our favorite music, video games, and movies contain violence that to some extent motivates young people to do such things. This essay aims to investigate some consequences of such a problem and put forward a number of possible remedies.
Arguably, the detrimental effect which is stemming from this issue is the increase of criminals in the early age. Some social taboos that are contained in music lyrics and movies are somewhat effortless to be absorbed by the youngsters, especially, the kids who are lacking guidance and supervision on how they act and sources they watch. Nevertheless, in such an age, this problem seems to be totally overlooked, in fact, numerous parents would seem to look down upon the prevention endeavor. If the children are not to be supervised from an early age, their actions would be unapproachable when they grow up and develop. Furthermore, advice and suggestions can be useless.
Regarding potential solutions, probably the main solution would be to filter movies and music based on the content. It is known that movie companies offer various genres of films, one of which might be the other options for children. This option could be selected through watching the whole film, focusing on the conversation, and analyzing improper words.
Overall, lack of proper attention toward several kind of movies, music and video play appear to be the considerable cause, while sorting the indulgence in such things is advisable to address the problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 42, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun kind seems to be countable; consider using: 'several kinds'.
Suggestion: several kinds
...verall, lack of proper attention toward several kind of movies, music and video play appear ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, look, nevertheless, regarding, so, while, in fact, in particular, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1417.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17153284672 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83295617405 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638686131387 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0910516243 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.083333333 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8333333333 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213715340458 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0738746684342 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0355179320822 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119098814912 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0219472711888 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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