In most countries fast food is becoming cheaper and more available
Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages
The production of convenience food is perhaps to ease the consumers with the cooking process, and thus, immediately provide them with fast food. However, this kind of consumption is becoming inexpensive and common. I believe that the drawbacks do outweigh the benefits.
In the first place, the advantages that might be occurring in the states where fast food is offered at a low price is that the marketplace can make a huge profit by entering various economic and social levels. That could happen because this kind of food is popular among the affluent population and the poor. For example, if a well-known KFC or Burger King launches a new type of food, the wealthy people will not be hesitant to purchase it just because it simply tastes delicious and they possess the money to pay for it, likewise the low-income category.
While the advantages may seem beneficial, the drawbacks of this issue may appear on the other side. Unknowingly, if fast food is eaten carelessly due to its easy buy, it can cause several health issues in the long-term. For instance, when someone is used to having three meal preparations eating dehydrated food, it would not be a chance for avoiding obesity and diabetes, two diseases that often afflict people with unbalanced nutrition. Undoubtedly, the effect appears to be more critical to people especially those who are living with a sedentary lifestyle.
In conclusion, addressing the disadvantages, it would seem that the risk of the illness mentioned is something worth avoiding in the long run.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, likewise, may, so, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1290.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05882352941 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79284525552 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635294117647 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.5144263364 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.272727273 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1818181818 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5454545455 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170547329807 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065306418465 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383678615792 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0930724210995 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0661054296789 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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