Crime appears to be rising in most countries in the world, especially among young people.
Identify the possible causes of this trend, and propose some solutions you think would be effective.
Currently minor crimes including delinquency are figured out to be increasing. This is markedly committed by the teenagers. The underlying causes derive from three factors and numbers of remedies appear to be feasible.
The main triggering issue is lack of role models among adolescents, which appear in numerous countries and societies. Admittedly, when it is referring to the creativity level, the young era is a considerable one. In spite of this idea, the early age minors still are followers. They mimic and copy what is recognized as ideal by their current circumstances, and especially, the idols they adore. For instance, a child grows up obeying a liar role model. This child would soon appear to be a liar, in accordance with the action that is reflected as ‘good’ by his role model. The second and third factors are peer pressure and insufficiency of support. The schools nowadays are places of influence, which should be considered by parents who want a decent condition for their kids. This peer pressure is highly influential, particularly on the unsupported children. This support source ranges from parent to teacher.
Turning to the possible solutions, an obvious step would be for spouses to be educated more so they could provide more objectives for their children. For example, if a spouse is informative about global needs, he/she would find someone who makes a contributory attempt to be his/her child’s role model. Moreover, making a survey for potential education and providing time for family talk are the other solutions. The former would include coming to the child’s school and the best option for the latter would be a short discussion about today’s problem.
In conclusion, the ideal figure, the pressure from friends and less encouragement appear to be the problems, while parental knowledge, educational place research and family moments are advisable to address these problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, second, so, still, third, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1625.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29315960912 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87366208368 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612377850163 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 12.0 2.52805611222 475% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.0570967466 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.2777777778 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0555555556 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205747761237 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0610890615423 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471699298471 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124950050594 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0424998754498 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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