While mobile phones have many advantages, a number of problems have also resulted from them or the ways in which tey are used.
What are some of these problems?
What solutions can you suggest for solving these problem?
Countless upgrades in smart phone technology have transformed these devices into multifaceted tools, providing users with features ranging from advanced camera capabilities to instant access to social media platforms. However, this essay aims to analyze the detrimental effects resulting from these advancements and propose potential solutions to address these problems.
One of the most concerning consequences of extensive smart phone use is the prevalence of deception in various aspects of online interaction. The ease of using editing apps to modify one's appearance and persona has enabled individuals to create fake personalities and manipulate their appearance without difficulty. While these editing apps are readily available for download on smart phones, they can also be exploited by unscrupulous individuals to carry out deceptive actions with the intent of personal gain. For example, these actions may involve transactions that lack the inclusion of accurate personal information. Furthermore, the manipulation of one's true self can exacerbate the detrimental effects of cyberbullying, as the perpetrators of such actions often hide behind a veil of anonymity.
To address these concerns, it is crucial to promote online awareness and responsible smart phone usage within society. Smartphone users should be encouraged to prioritize productivity over rule violations when using their devices. Governments, in collaboration with experts in cybersecurity, can play a pivotal role by offering informative lectures and programs to educate mobile phone users about the responsible use of technology. Additionally, implementing severe penalties for violations can serve as a deterrent and send a strong message about the seriousness of this issue.
In summary, the lack of personal authenticity in the online world has become a pressing concern. Raising awareness about responsible smartphone usage and providing information on proper online behavior are essential steps in addressing this issue. Furthermore, the imposition of significant consequences for rule violations can contribute to mitigating the adverse effects of deception and misrepresentation in the digital realm.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2023-10-17 | buahkiwienak | 84 | view |
| 2023-10-17 | buahkiwienak | 61 | view |
- As more and more information is available online the role of textbooks has become obsolete Therefore universities should replace traditional books with digital materials Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages 73
- Crime appears to be rising in most countries in the world especially among young people Identify the possible causes of this trend and propose some solutions you think would be effective 78
- While mobile phones have many advantages a number of problems have also resulted from them or the ways in which tey are used What are some of these problems What solutions can you suggest for solving these problem 61
- The use of violence in music lyrics video games and films seen by children is causing concern in many societies What problems may be caused by this type of violent imagery and what steps could be taken to lessen the impact on young people 78
- In most countries fast food is becoming cheaper and more available Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 183, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...he ease of using editing apps to modify ones appearance and persona has enabled indi...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, then, while, for example, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1876.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.97452229299 5.12529762239 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28835805744 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59872611465 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 617.4 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.0 1.60771543086 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2826207905 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.0 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4285714286 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165865179629 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535403482704 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0412916059807 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0966120847418 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494401985624 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 15.31 50.2224549098 30% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.64 12.4159519038 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.81 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 78.4519038076 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.