As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. To
what extent do you agree or disagree?
Businesses or cooperative organizations are often known as the executor of various economic plans. However, constant demands of the targeted markets seems to be generally affiliated with the current social conditions. It appears that companies look up to those societal aspects more deeply and this essay will explain why.
As a provider, the business activity should operate based on the actual circumstances that exist along the way it promotes its services or products. Nonetheless, the vast majority of the start-ups ignore the essence of understanding the field of business, accordingly, it only focuses on what it should make instead of accommodating the customers’ needs. With this in mind, it is clear that social responsibilities do contribute a high value to the future of a company by securing the market in an indirect method. For instance, carrying out a little experiment to see how customers respond to a certain product. Furthermore, their satisfaction rate can serve as a guiding point to develop the whole business plan.
Secondly, businessmen who participate in social events would likely gain greater impact on their collaboration with other businessmen, for instance, attending other companies’ product launches. This is because the social exposure they are used to attain will lead to confidence enhancement. In other words, the knowledge acquired in these events will boost their interaction and communication with their business partners.
In conclusion, business productivity can be maximized with sort of social interactions with the outsider, and that is the reason why companies seem to be concerned about that.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 240, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[5]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'used to attaining'.
Suggestion: used to attaining
...is because the social exposure they are used to attain will lead to confidence enhancement. In...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, furthermore, however, look, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, for instance, in conclusion, sort of, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1402.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54150197628 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15802608899 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.652173913043 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5986290776 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.833333333 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0833333333 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0833333333 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123097351003 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0414967061561 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0276173067817 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0694805223329 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300823363461 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.05 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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