Universities and colleges are now offering qualifications through distance learning from the Internet rather than teachers in the classroom. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, with the significant development of tourism, a school of thought holds that traveling abroad is necessary to gain experiences in foreign countries. Meanwhile others claim that based-on modern technology such as TV and the Internet people can also broaden knowledge about other nations. These viewpoints are justifiable , this essay will discuss both the advantages and disadvantages below.
On the one hand , traveling abroad has a positive effect on the community. One of the main reasons is that people can immerse themselves in environment to understand the lifestyles and customs of local people. These things are realistic and real ,which TV and the Internet cannot demonstrate. Moreover, traveling in person brings people to local festivals or, enjoy some of the delicious nation's cuisine.
On the other hand, it is understandable why some people consider that there is no better way than traveling to other countries to gain experiences and culture through the Internet and TV programs. With a doubt, people can easily find a wide range of resources to gain experiences just by a click. Eventually, all information which travelers themselves still have not known about it is in their hand. For instance, based-on travel Youtubers who spend quite a lot of time traveling and reviewing for positive and negative feedbacks are useful and ecomonical, people can widen their horizons with views of this area.
In conclusion, although traveling abroad through social media can bring people some benefits, I strongly agree that people should be directly traveling abroad to immerse themselves in different countries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, still, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1382.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44094488189 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89108948971 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59842519685 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6478384637 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.166666667 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1666666667 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0629778644983 0.244688304435 26% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.026022954914 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0323624641172 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0418976861283 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0286602269849 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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