Modern technology is changing our world. It has advantages such as bringing people closer together through communication; it also has disadvantages such as destroying the differences between cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In modern society, technology is constantly transforming our lives. Social media brings people closer together through communication, but it can also have negative effects, such as bridging the gap between traditional cultures. I totally agree with this statement and would like to add my own perspective.
On the one hand, modern technology allows people to communicate more effectively in many cases. This holds particularly true in situations where they live in different countries or in a city that is very far from their house, families, or their friends. They can use software and access the internet to make phone calls and do video chats. Another benefit is that you can develop yourself in the global economy without having to relocate overseas. YouTubers and livestreamers, for instance, who earn big money by using social media and some high-quality modern technology to expand their channels to people from many different countries and become well-known through trending content.
On the other hand, I also think that modern technology has some downsides such as the loss of cultural diversity. This enables one to synchronise with different countries and estimate the differences between them. Similarly, some people are dependent on certain high-tech devices, so they are less willing to develop their knowledge and experience in real life without researching everything online. A downside of technology is that it uses a lot of equipment and machines that work faster than humans and have tremendous power to complete tasks.
In conclusion, the development of technology has both merits and drawbacks in our lives. It allows people to be closer together but it destroys cultural differences as well. Technology should be used properly and productively in some appropriate jobs, in my opinion.
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- The graph below shows the average retirement age of males and females in six countries in 2003 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 613, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...to expand their channels to people from many different countries and become well-known through...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, similarly, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in many cases, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1533.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39788732394 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92697566955 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602112676056 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8339999952 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.2 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9333333333 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.06666666667 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31016727476 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0979504324824 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0727721405069 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190073309563 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609104999749 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.