Modern technology is changing our world. This has advantages such as bringing people closer together through communication. It also has disadvantages such as destrying the differences between cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is sometimes argued that contemporary technologies should can change our earth. In my opinion, it should wrong because has more disadvantages such as: infringe the dissimilar among cultures.
There are several reasons why I would argue against infringe and allocate. Firstly, it is very worse when allocating with such as: parents, friends and nature. Secondly, these distribute do not benefit to people in our daily lives: they do not see animals and nature because it was providing that to isolation and it become bad happening. Finally, many this factors doing people bad and it is very important to know that this can lead to very big causes which can lead to fatigue and eye fetigue.
I believe that the contemporary technology have more benefits to been closer with people.
Furthermore people can know n what happen in other side of the world in the network. People can learn more informations with modern technology such as: subjects, doing something helpful and they can share with each other it doing people closer. One of the advantages people doing their works in remotely or this works do robots such as: we know 3D printers or other robotics. Consequently, it was better than past life of the people and it lead to civilization our technology and doing more modern and better.
In conclusion, I would say that modern technology can change our world but it can destroy and it was more have than doing better or more heplful, useful. It is important to find a advantages than disadvantages but majority of humanity have advantages of this technology changing our space.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1328.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97378277154 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69924966312 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.50936329588 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0193123015 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.153846154 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5384615385 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.23076923077 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306356873384 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113238793316 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572006588542 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167641565361 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0653617371863 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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