This is a fact that water pollutions has become an serious issue for not only humans but also the wildlife. There are plenty of reasons that contributes in contamination of water . Along with some reverse effects, some measures can be taken to tackle this issue.
On the one hand, water pollution is a major problem being faced by entire eco- system. Firstly, the big cause of water pollution is population growth and industrialization as the waste material from industries and farms is mixed in the water that is the mixture of toxicants and other effluents of water pollution. As a consequent, these chemicals and poisonous elements pollutes water. It can effect inland water, groundwater, lakes, rivers as well as coastal waters. Secondly, plethora of pesticides are used by the farmers to cultivate crops as for destroying insects that harm crops at early stage, they spray various insecticides to control pests that results in water contamination. As a result, using contaminated water for irrigation for sensitive plants effects the health of humans as when those plants are taken by human as a meal then they becomes victims of incurable diseases. Most importantly, , marine dumping is an another important cause of water pollution as dumping domestic garbage in the water is crazy but still than is done by many countries and household wastage is thrown in the oceans to treat the waste. Finally, rising temperatures that is called global warming is killing aquatic water creatures which is polluting the water. Consequently, it has been ruining the eco chain by disappearing the species of birds and animals.
On the other hand, number of solutions can be applied in order to curb this problem. First of all, industries should be established far from the residential areas to protect people from the harmful impacts of water pollution that is caused by the dangerous effluents of industries and factories which would help in making the society a better place to live. Besides this, the contaminated water carries bacteria and viruses which are spread of diseases such as typhoid, cholera etcetera. Therefore, the industries waste should be treated in a different way instead of mixing in the clean water for saving the water sources such aa ponds, oceans and rivers that would save water life also. Additionally, there are some things that degrade the quality of water such as plastic that can not be disposed easily that is why it must be disposed off by other safe ways rather than throwing jn the water sources. It is interesting to note that, focusing on organic agriculture can reduce the demand for pesticides and insecticides which would help in maintaining the health of society. Apart from this, likewise rural areas, the domestic waste can be used as fertilizer in the fields that helps kn the growth of crops. So, garbage must not be dumped in the oceans that is a big source of water. Last but not least, for reducing water pollution there should be control on global warming as people must save natural resources to decrease the effects of global warming that would prevent water lives.
To conclude, although water contamination has some reasons yet it can be reduced by implementing some measures.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, finally, first, firstly, if, likewise, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, well, apart from, as for, as to, such as, as a result, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 33.0 13.1623246493 251% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 7.30460921844 274% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2694.0 1615.20841683 167% => OK
No of words: 535.0 315.596192385 170% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03551401869 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80937282943 4.20363070211 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71109975837 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 272.0 176.041082164 155% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508411214953 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 841.5 506.74238477 166% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.2811489918 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.454545455 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3181818182 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.86363636364 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 33.0 5.01903807615 657% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338310050994 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111341075372 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600909199716 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206826062543 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0832774453162 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 145.0 78.4519038076 185% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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