Water pollution has been an increasing problem over the last few decades.
What causes water pollution?
How can we prevent this problem?
Over the last few decades, the contamination of water has been an increasingly serious issue which is concern by everyone. In my opinion, the issue of water pollution is mainly due to both immoral industries and agriculture sector. However, there are several measures can tackle with this water pollution.
Firstly, the reason for the water pollution being serious is that industries release unwanted waste into water bodies, for instance rivers and seas, directly without any process. Owing to the expenditures which should be spent on purification of the toxics are high, therefore without any supervision by related authorities, these selfish factory operators would just release the waste without any consideration. Secondly, artificial fertiliser is another factor with regards to water pollution. During fertilising process the crops, artificial fertilisers are leached into river beds which lead to the growth of algae. As a result, marines and aquatic plants will be killed and the water bodies will be polluted irreversibly which is due to algae bloom.
There are two effective methods for preventing water pollution. One possible way is that both governments and citizens should supervise every industry in order to prevent water pollution. With the supervision of everyone, no factory would dare to disobey the regulation of purification since such an action will be reported to the government hence meet punishments. Another method which the government opt to do is encouraging natural fertilisers instead of artificial fertilisers by providing welfare for those farmers who use them. This method would hopefully discourage people from using artificial fertiliser which is helpful in preventing water bodies to be contaminated.
In conclusion, by having frequent supervision on every industries and introducing fertilisers which are ecologically friendly are effective ways to tackle this issue. If the government implements these measures, water can be free from pollution.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1696.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.65333333333 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99062238041 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6909424528 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.066666667 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.26666666667 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217968718249 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0886400030533 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711674422115 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157062528195 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0979878778659 0.056905535591 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.49 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.