In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people, why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
Having an own house is rather pivotal than renting one in certain countries nowadays. In my opinion, it is due to human's deepest nature which seeks for a sense of security and a higher social standing. However, it may lead to a malignant outcome under certain circumstances.
To begin with, stability and pride is definitely required by humans. Renting a house doesn't satisfy the desire of an individual fully; which is because the property does not belong to him therefore they have a lack of sense of security. In addition, it is shameful of an individual in certain countries who doesn't own their property as it shows his incapability of raising his future spouse. Owning a property not only stabilises the condition of living but also makes them proud as their abilities are proven. Moreover, the size and condition of a house demonstrates the owner's social status as the higher the quality of house, they become rather unaffordable. Such an advantage could take place under certain scenarios such as in the form of packaging.
Nonetheless, owning a house is almost impossible for a vast amount of people. Large proportions of people are living in rented apartments and are not capable of buying a house. Skyrocketed house prices eradicate their intention to achieve such an unrealistic expectation. Force buying a house would provoke their funds being inadequate as a huge amount of loan has to be paid. Subsequently, worsening their quality of life as well as health conditions. Therefore, renting a house is rather sensible as more money will be saved and spent on other forms such as investing in stock markets.
In conclusion, owning a home is rather important not only because it proves an individual's power but also psychologically unstable can be secured. However, despite its importance, people shouldn't push themselves to burden a property due to its exorbitant pricing. However, these capitals could be spent elsewhere in order to improve their financial conditions.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 115, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'humans the deepest'.
Suggestion: humans the deepest
...s nowadays. In my opinion, it is due to humans deepest nature which seeks for a sense of secur...
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Line 3, column 86, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...ely required by humans. Renting a house doesnt satisfy the desire of an individual ful...
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Line 3, column 308, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... an individual in certain countries who doesnt own their property as it shows his inca...
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Line 7, column 188, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: shouldn't
...However, despite its importance, people shouldnt push themselves to burden a property du...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, nonetheless, so, therefore, well, as to, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1666.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12615384615 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90909042496 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.6881424557 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5555555556 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0555555556 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.72222222222 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147399408947 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0459941556697 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530005889735 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0972706824786 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0303725322022 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 115, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'humans the deepest'.
Suggestion: humans the deepest
...s nowadays. In my opinion, it is due to humans deepest nature which seeks for a sense of secur...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 86, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...ely required by humans. Renting a house doesnt satisfy the desire of an individual ful...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 308, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... an individual in certain countries who doesnt own their property as it shows his inca...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 188, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: shouldn't
...However, despite its importance, people shouldnt push themselves to burden a property du...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, nonetheless, so, therefore, well, as to, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1666.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12615384615 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90909042496 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.6881424557 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5555555556 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0555555556 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.72222222222 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147399408947 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0459941556697 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530005889735 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0972706824786 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0303725322022 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.