We are becoming increasingly dependent on computer-based technology.
How do you think it will change in the future?
It it good for us to rely so much on computers?
People are used to utilize technological devices, which are versatile and can help in their daily life. Simultaneously we are starting to be addicted on these technology. Some people suggest that it will lead to some negative impacts,however, in this essay we will discuss, what can happen in the nearest future and why it will have a positive effect.
It is not a secret that now the biggest amount of work on the factories is done by robotic machines, but in the future situation will alter and robots will do not only heavy work but also house or office paper work. For instance, they can work as librarian in schools or secretary in business companies. Another example of future changing of technologies is about online meeting and online education. Workers of the companies can make online calls and have a discussions about work details while they will stay at home. The same situations is about students, they can study in their convenient time and use a lot of materials on their computer-based devices, they don't need to go anywhere and take any paper books.
These kind of changes can have positive impact, first of all on time saving. If the most amount our work are done by technologies, we will have more spare time for different other activities with family members or friend or even for self development. For example,we can go to the gym, visit cooking courses or any other types. Secondly, it is convenient way of saving information, as I mentioned before students can save their studying materials on their devices, workers it any different sphere can use it for documents saving. Date base of each modern device has really big memory and you don't need to print out documents and take with yourself.
To summarise, technology play important role in every person's life and help us at work place or in studying by that bring positive changes. People can rely on this and have their own benefits from these changes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 154, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this technology' or 'these technologies'?
Suggestion: this technology; these technologies
...ously we are starting to be addicted on these technology. Some people suggest that it will lead ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , however
...at it will lead to some negative impacts,however, in this essay we will discuss, what ca...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd why it will have a positive effect. It is not a secret that now the biggest ...
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Line 2, column 463, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a discussion' or simply 'discussions'?
Suggestion: a discussion; discussions
...ompanies can make online calls and have a discussions about work details while they will stay...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...s on their computer-based devices, they dont need to go anywhere and take any paper ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... go anywhere and take any paper books. These kind of changes can have positive ...
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Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'These kinds'?
Suggestion: This kind; These kinds
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Suggestion: , we
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... out documents and take with yourself. To summarise, technology play important ...
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Line 4, column 63, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1600.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8048048048 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67333729969 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552552552553 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4881064102 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.666666667 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.73333333333 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165488610516 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0532518405466 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0273564006242 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0961653100771 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0225022868397 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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