Currently, our planet is facing with other issues, establish a good diplomatic relationship between different countries is more important than ever. As a resident, I think everyone in the country and the government want to make a good relationship with other country due to the appreciating in the quantity of global problem, I’m all agree with this statement.
Starkly that making a good connection with other countries can get some benefits. Firstly, earth’s natural is got more disaster day by day, tsunami, volcanic or earthquake come from the natural, which are the worst thing people getting and these impacts make an affective to the different countries with their residents, from that they can get supported from other countries. Secondly, disease is a very bad thing, especially for us humans, a real example of this is coronavirus which causing abundant death to Vietnamese’s people, fortunately, getting supported in dire from its best connection that Cuba, lots of Vietnamese’s people are saved.
Opposite of that, the world current is very easy to happen wars and establishing a good relationship is the most advantage to your country with the other connection’s helping, but without the supporting in army, the country will be destroyed by their enemies. One last disadvantage without making a relation that the superiority of other countries, the world becomes modernized with the development of other country, the nation without supporting will be poor and backward.
In conclusion, the cooperation between countries is a necessity that countries need to have and it will receive certain benefits that it brings
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1383.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36046511628 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00881314692 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581395348837 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.3143879364 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 172.875 106.682146367 162% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.25 20.7667163134 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.625 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267670960186 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129793201789 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116901008866 0.0667982634062 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166695673088 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.137557947658 0.056905535591 242% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.9 13.0946893788 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.4 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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