We cannot help everyone in the world that needs help, so we should only be concerned with our own communities and countries.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
People have different arguments about whether we should help the needy in domestic and international at he same time. While I accept that we should take our country as priority, I strongly support that we have to assist people in need all over the world.
On the one hand, disadvantaged residents still exists in our own country. For example, families which have settled down in rural areas tend to earn less money to support their basic needs. Their children have hard time going to school due to the extremely far distance. This condition, in the end, will lead to the insufficient competitiveness for those kids and thus this cycle will repeat itself. In order to become a better community, all of the people in Taiwan should help them in many ways.
On the other hand, there are some serious problems occur all over the world. Firstly, some farmers grow certain types of plant for multi-national companies. Those businessmen take the majority of the profits, while the earnings these farmers got cannot even but the food to eat. Secondly, some countries or areas have no access to clean water and a safe accommodation. In Taiwan, however, this situation will not happen due to well technology we possess. Finally, a common cold or a fever can take their lives in impoverished countries. This will no longer happening in our nation due to medical development.
In conclusion, I believe it is improper to ignore those people who need help all over the world but assist our residents.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 439, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
... In order to become a better community, all of the people in Taiwan should help them in ma...
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Line 5, column 348, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'safe accommodation'.
Suggestion: safe accommodation
...areas have no access to clean water and a safe accommodation. In Taiwan, however, this situation wil...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, thus, well, while, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1241.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88582677165 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68297482223 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61811023622 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.7282202574 49.4020404114 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.7333333333 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9333333333 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.06666666667 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180143555839 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0563192416084 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533561538439 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12078935737 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514328335562 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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