As well as making money, businesses also have a responsibility towards society. To what extent do you agree or disagree
Regarding the issue of businesses’ liability, there has been considerable controversy whether they should pay tribute to the community where they thrive. Whilst I agree that gaining profits is the top priority, I would incline that being responsible to the society is no less vital.
On the one hand, it is plausible that the conglomerates should only emphasize on making money. Evidently, due to the fierceness of the rat race, it is challenging for companies to survive since without appropriate capital management, they can not cover the expenditures on their running costs, employees’ salaries and facilities’ payments. That is to say, should companies do not have competence in paying the necessary bills and meeting the changing demands of customers, the concerns for social responsibilities are obviously redundant. Moreover, the huge amount of taxes paid by the businesses has been a pragmatic method to show responsibility towards the society.
On the other hand, by assisting in social predicaments, the enterprises do not only benefit the community but also themselves. It is beyond doubt that by making a positive contribution to society, businesses can bolster their images and build their brands. In fact, should companies be well aware and collaborate with governments to address current alarming issues, more customers will pay attention to their brands and be more willing to purchase goods. In other words, the conglomerates that sponsor environmental projects or educational initiatives, can become more renowned and maintain a professional reputation. For instance, some beverage brands such as Starbucks has showed considerable concerns towards the amount of plastic packaging disposed into the environment and decided to utilize green and recyclable products; as a consequence, they do not only reduce the utilities’ costs but also remain the leading brand with the increasing consumers who support the go-green activities.
In conclusion, albeit gaining profits is the conglomerates’ first priority, taking responsibility to the community also has a crucial role to play.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, moreover, regarding, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in other words, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1791.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.6144200627 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24892254228 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598746081505 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.4179132996 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.25 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5833333333 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0833333333 7.06120827912 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192082002689 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646701787967 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404140135833 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104949139928 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0246037705233 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.93 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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