As well as making money, businesses also have a responsibilty towards society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Revenue has a fundamental in every aspect of life, enterprises gives a lot of effect to people. I fully agree with this opinion and think that community dependents come from a businesses.
First of all, i believe that establishment of a business can increasing living standart of many people. Someone easily to get some job and have ability to handle every problem about financial because from the business will be creating field of work. In other words, Enterprises can be mitigating amount of unployment so that the level of poverty can be reduced. For instance, MSME has important position to encourage economy in some region and creating welfare to many people because from MSME all people can find the job and get salary for survive their life until who has failed to get job in government will be absorbed by SMES, total of MSMEs in Indonesia is very much that proving every single person have occasion for get the best job. That's why business have important role to prompting livability of society.
Secondly, business can produce what the people need in daily activity. Every person delight go to shopping and they takes many item for survive their life. Moreover, every business has quality by own right from their product and providing various types of life necessities such as secondary, primary or tertiary with different prices. For example, we now about Shopee e-commerce this aplication providing all item what we need, and sometimes we look many items with the same model even imitation from their product, however that was different prices and so we can choose correspondent by our self, the aim why they are showed the same product with different rate because the quantity of their product is not the same and customise with customer budget. Thus, with the convenience offered through the products provided, it is easier for people to make transactions and purchases.
To conclude, i strongly believe that the big effect comunity accepted by some business because no need thinking about work and confuse about how we buy something different for our life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 175, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a business' or simply 'businesses'?
Suggestion: a business; businesses
...ink that community dependents come from a businesses. First of all, i believe that establis...
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Line 2, column 15, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... come from a businesses. First of all, i believe that establishment of a busines...
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Line 2, column 742, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...son have occasion for get the best job. Thats why business have important role to pro...
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Line 3, column 116, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'take'
Suggestion: take
... person delight go to shopping and they takes many item for survive their life. Moreo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, for instance, such as, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1730.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56808781214 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552023121387 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 108.229211076 49.4020404114 219% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 133.076923077 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6153846154 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.84615384615 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0722665144403 0.244688304435 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0351716140391 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0313328166909 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0403440549883 0.151304729494 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.013628143134 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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