As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree
or disagree?
Nowadays, the responsible of big businesses toward social as important as earning a lot of money, and I beliveve that they should conduct their business in a socially responsible way.
On the one hand, It is undeniable that businesses have to make money to survive in a complex world. A company needs to have a lot of money to pay for operating fee, such as employee salaries, living expenses and indispensable resources for investment and development. Of course, to be a top companies they also need to invest in improvement and innovation. In other words, a company can only make a positive contribution to society if it is in good financial resources.
On the other hand, with the modernised world, not only companies should focus on economic development but also businesses have to contribute to building a more civilized society. Companies can create more socially useful jobs so that people aren’t unemployed. One thing that is importantly is business activities may have effects on the environment. Production process could lead to environmental indanger. Businesses could use a proportion of their profits to support local charities, environment projects or education initiatives. Finally, instead of trying to maximum their tax the bosses should contribute to society through the tax system.
In conclusion, I believe that companies would seriously their social responsibilities as they improve on their financial companies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, may, so, in conclusion, of course, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1215.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 226.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37610619469 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19344287171 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58407079646 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4804243162 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.25 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8333333333 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.41666666667 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22219348277 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0791149402807 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709823405548 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14284397544 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0607728203648 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.