It is sometimes argued that businesses should have a duty in society apart from earning profit or economic development. Personally, I completely agree with this view.
The option of business responsibility is attractive for several reasons, the first reason for this is the increase of corporate social responsibility can improve customer’s perception of a brand. This is because people are likely to have a huge impression and outlook on a company's brands, therefore, increasing customer’s trust and perception to purchase items from that brand. The life plastic industry, for instance, has supplied a wide range of friendly plastic stuff such as bags that can be recycled, and bowls that can be disposed of in nature. There is a big responsibility in the environment and society of that brand, which more and more people are using these products. Consequently, the duty for the community would have a huge impact on customers, which brings many benefits for businesses.
Moreover, I believe that being socially responsible can help businesses attract more shareholders. The main one is that good images of industries can be highlighted to become well known companies, which attract other shareholders to invest in their industry. Furthermore, investors might get interested in their products if there are many good compliment,review of inhabitants. The Local Food company is a case in point, which produces fresh food to ensure human’s life and food security. There are many big shareholders who invest their money in food procedure’s company in order to make Local Food brands more popular in the domestic and international market.
In conclusion, for the reasons I have mentioned above=ve , i maintain that business should have a duty on society apart from gaining profits, it can be predicted that many industries with high responsibility to every aspect of life might develop in the less distant future.
- Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 78
- As well as making money businesses also have social responsibilities Do you agree or disagree 73
- Some think that climate change reforms will negatively affect business Other feel they are an opportunity for business Discuss both views and give your own opinion 73
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 354, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , review
...oducts if there are many good compliment,review of inhabitants. The Local Food company ...
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Line 4, column 57, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...or the reasons I have mentioned above=ve , i maintain that business should have a ...
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Line 4, column 60, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...the reasons I have mentioned above=ve , i maintain that business should have a du...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, well, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1618.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32236842105 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12121848601 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546052631579 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.833624916 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.461538462 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3846153846 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46153846154 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165583897566 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0587024294148 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484906357298 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102188916003 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00898039171298 0.056905535591 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 354, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , review
...oducts if there are many good compliment,review of inhabitants. The Local Food company ...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 57, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...or the reasons I have mentioned above=ve , i maintain that business should have a ...
^^
Line 4, column 60, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...the reasons I have mentioned above=ve , i maintain that business should have a du...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, well, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1618.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32236842105 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12121848601 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546052631579 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.833624916 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.461538462 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3846153846 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46153846154 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165583897566 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0587024294148 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484906357298 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102188916003 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00898039171298 0.056905535591 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.