As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. Do you agree or disagree?
People hold different opinions about the kind of obligations that a company should have. Although I partly agree that the top priority of an organization is to gain profits, I believe that they should also be in charge of society.
On the one hand, businesses have significantly contributed to their community when it comes to providing opportunities for citizens to get employment. One of the reasons is that if companies are successful, this will mean that they are able to expand their business, generating more job opportunities for the community. Some large multinational corporations, such as Apple and Microsoft, are good models, having created careers for thousands of individuals around the world, which helps to decrease the proportion of unemployment in many countries. Furthermore, as companies gain more profits, they will pay more in taxes to the government. These financial sources can be allocated to invest in vital fields such as education and healthcare, which will benefit all communities.
On the other hand, it is important that businesses take on social responsibility. First, since the increasing number of firms causes extremely dangerous threats to the environment, businesses need to immediately take proper measures in order to protect nature. For example, they are able to apply new technology in order to recycle trash instead of throwing it away instantly. Second, corporations also consider helping unfortunate people, such as the homeless and the disabled. This will not only contribute more to society but also improve their images or brands.
In conclusion, while companies should focus on creating profits to create jobs and contribute taxes to the authorities, I also think that they should have social responsibility to address environmental issues and enhance moral values.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, second, so, while, for example, in conclusion, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1540.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4609929078 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12086555635 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613475177305 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0248458978 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.461538462 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6923076923 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13683027708 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0471747155164 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0421037806971 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0883273044289 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292178992352 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.