Some people think saving money is good, but others think that spending money is a better way to enjoy life.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.
How people use money intelligently and reasonably is an interesting concern in all periods of the human revolution and many parts of the world. While there is a strong argument about spending money on enjoyment and entertainment in life, I believe that saving money is a necessary plan for risks and later life.
On the one hand, death anxiety is one of the main reasons why many people tend to spend money on life. When it comes to common beliefs, it is usually said that people cannot bring their money along. The more money people make attempts to save, the more lost they could get if an unpredictable death happens in life. In addition, people could improve their emotions and reduce the stress caused by the daily workload in modern society. What people purchase or participate in recreational activities could enhance social developments due to contributing taxes for the authorities and increasing income for inhabitants. Therefore, spending money is an effective way to enjoy life.
On the other hand, I support the benefits of saving money, despite many above arguments. Saving money could be considered a long-term plan for both retirement and unpredictable accidents. People facing unemployment or pandemic could avoid a homeless situation that could lessen social burdens, for example, financial, health, and food suppliers. Besides, saving does not make people impossible to enjoy their life. To make financial security, people could save a small part of their money, and use the others for recreational activities. By observing parents saving, children could learn about the responsibility of using their money as soon as possible.
In conclusion, to enjoy their life, people should spend their money reasonably, and I think they also should have a saving habit instead of spending it all.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, so, therefore, while, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1518.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19863013699 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80254187226 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551369863014 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5579063152 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.2 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4666666667 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248470479673 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100930666452 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522692023025 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174134358081 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00951477543424 0.056905535591 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.