More and more students at university today are not choosing to study science.
Why is this happening? What are the effects of this?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.
By all accounts, the tendency of choosing science subjects has been gradually decreasing at university nowadays. In my opinion, this movement would stem from many subjective and objective reasons, and I also find its impacts on job opportunities in the future.
I personally believe that there are various reasons why science subjects are found less attractive for students. There is no doubt that studying science is more remarkably difficult than learning other objects such as social and art aspects. Because of its logical terms and scientific definitions, it seems that students tend to have more difficulties in attempting to pursue or follow it in their curricula. Furthermore, science subjects which are likely to relate to practical lessons and their hi-tech machines like medicine and physics could lead to huge fees. It clearly seems more unaffordable for students, especially those who hardly have enough financial ability to pursue those fields.
As a result, I recognize that this trend with less involvement in science could lead to numerous influences on career developments of those students. On the one hand, the number of engineers or physicians who used to choose science to pursue could become reduced if more and more students intend to avoid studying science at university. When it comes to career opportunities after graduating , there is no denying that students that study science are able to find more benefits than peers that do not choose science in order to pursue. On the other hand, it could be seen as a positive potential that they are capable of increasing the growth of kinds of jobs with regard to creation or invention like artists and composers in society. It means that students would have more opportunities and choices for their career paths which are suitable with their characteristics and hobbies, and make them happy for their later life.
In conclusion, those effects of the tendency that fewer students choose science at university could bring different results of the students ' career ladder in the future, regardless of the probable difficulties that they could face.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as a result, in my opinion, with regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1783.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24411764706 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77739085281 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547058823529 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 35.587711462 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.153846154 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1538461538 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.38461538462 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246767926767 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0892223774913 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510250180496 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146628100126 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306476588954 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.