as well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. Do you agree or disagree?
Determining priorities has been a controversial issue for enterprises. It is argued that taking social responsibilities should stay paralleled with earning money. Personally, I am in favor of the above statement and will support my view with specific reasons and examples in this essay.
To begin with, making money plays an indispensable role for businesses. Indeed, it is not only an enterprise’s basic function but also the way it contribute to the society. Particularly, the higher profit it makes, the more taxes the government would receive, and, as a result, better welfare would be provided, such as better infrastructure for public schools or hospitals. Furthermore, thriving in a rigorous market facilitates brands to expand their businesses, which are beneficial for the labor market, since a huge number of jobs would be created.
On the other hand, social responsibility also cannot be overlooked. It is because while a business is processing, the society is suffering from many externalities. For example, a factory producing tobacco emits an excessive load of harmful gases, and, in addition, its consumer also suffering from many dangerous health problems due to smoking. This is the reason why Philip Morris, a famous cigarette company established a fund for lung cancer research, since they realized that it is needed to shoulder the responsibility for this tragedy. Last but not least, enhancing public figure is another reason making social responsibility essential. Indeed, philanthropic projects, or private welfare programs are of great use to create strong impression for customers, who always appreciate ethical values when they choose a product.
To sum up, I believe that besides enriching their budget, enterprises should also run their businesses in a socially responsible manner.
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Suggestion: contributes
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, look, so, while, for example, in addition, such as, as a result, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1547.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54480286738 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20491442495 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.673835125448 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1288661315 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.5 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9285714286 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3571428571 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120281581609 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0470079563975 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472482797156 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0760993273959 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0264319945419 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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