As well as making money businesses also have social responsibilities To what extent do you agree or disagree

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As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is an opinion that businesses have social responsibilities while they making money.The essay will discuss two side of this opinion.
We can’t negate that profit is the most important thing in running businesses.If companies unable to pay the bills or pay its employees, the company would not be able to survive in this competitive world.At the same time , low revenue , growing a business is almost impossible. As a result ,good donating for society is unsuitable.In other words , making profit is the first step of give back to society.
However , businesses should not only focus for earning money.They should contribute to society.For example: making charity , education project , enviroment idea.Besides , they can pay taxes regularly and on time, provide good fringe benefits for employees like Health Insurance , free dinner or pay for injuries experienced by workers in the workplace.By contributing for society , business can advanced imaging in front of general public .From that get a competitive advantage over all their competitors.
In my opinion , business and companies should contribute to society.If they do that , they not only develop their imaging , competitive advantage but also help country become civilization, development.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, so, while, for example, as a result, in my opinion, in other words

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1063.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 188.0 315.596192385 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65425531915 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12806249938 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.696808510638 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 338.4 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.2975951904 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 138.860505544 49.4020404114 281% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 212.6 106.682146367 199% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.6 20.7667163134 181% => OK
Discourse Markers: 21.2 7.06120827912 300% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141946002722 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0854282282797 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0716868181476 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101877337188 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0713641420477 0.056905535591 125% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.0 13.0946893788 183% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 17.0 50.2224549098 34% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 11.3001002004 178% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.08 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.18 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.1190380762 166% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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