What are the advantages and disadvantages of cyberculture?
With the frequent use of the Internet nowadays many people are convinced that cyberculture is a good option. This essay will suggest that online communication and various sorts of useful information are the biggest advantages, but escaping reality and reducing motivation to read are the primary disadvantages.
The main advantages of cyberculture are chatting via social networks and watching various developing videos. For people who live far from each other it is quite convenient to interact online without any relocation costs. Also, having a contact using messages is a great way for introverts disliking face-to-face interactions. Moreover, thanks to cyberculture people can learn more about our world by watching different videos that broaden people's horizons. For instance, there are a lot of programmes like “A live planet” that enable people to acquire new knowledge about various creatures and plants.
Despite these advantages, sometimes people spend a lot of time on the Internet forgetting about their private lives, friends, parents, and they get used to being on the global net, preferring it to reading. The point is that the Internet could be more attractive than the real world as there are bundles of information there. And so quite often human beings prefer sitting behind a screen to doing something in reality. Furthermore, some people, rather than reading books for the development of critical and creative thinking, prefer playing computer games as they find them more interesting. For example, when I studied in the 11th grade, my classmates were sitting with their phones during the breaks and no one was reading.
In conclusion, cyberculture can be advantageous if it allows people to have a chat online and access to knowledge. However, they should also be careful that it does not detach them from reality and substitute reading books.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1580.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33783783784 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83642178312 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641891891892 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0701920061 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.857142857 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0870543868914 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0362976689237 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641286769233 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.062028298733 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0424860560103 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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