What are some possible ways for modern workers to maintain work life balance

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What are some possible ways for modern workers to maintain work-life balance?

Although work-life balance is a huge challenge for modern workers, you can try these four ways. First, you must clearly define work and rest time. When your work hours are finished, you should just focus on your personal life. Unfortunately, when work causes stress, a lot of people try to get as much works done as possible and forget to take care of themselves. Sometimes work is so overwhelmed that you don't have time for your personal life. But health, happiness, and family are things that are hard to find from work. Therefore, you can refuse your boss when the work is overloaded. Second, you shouldn't expect everything to be perfect. It's okay if you give up some less important work so that you can spend more time with your family. You can't go out with your family and make a business plan for your company at the same time. You can only do each thing at the best you can for yourself. Letting yourself comfortably work and rest will make you more comfortable than always worrying about the chaos of work and life. In addition, you have to make sure you love your current job. If you can do a job you love, you will reduce stress when you find balance between work and life. That gives you the motivation to wake up every day without feeling tired or stressed. Finally, you should manage your finances properly. All worries about work and life start with money problems. When you have a financial balance, you don't need to worry too much about work pressure and life expenses. Therefore, it is important to ensure the best possible source of income and spending. In brief, although work-life balance is very difficult for people, we can try to use different ways to balance between work and life.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, second, so, therefore, in addition, in brief

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.625 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31712543701 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549342105263 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 5.43587174349 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.0539824211 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.3 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.45 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224413628672 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0850132072652 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0798509587171 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224413628672 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 13.0946893788 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.98 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.98 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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