What do you think you, what is the most important in our life career or marriage??? Write in this essay advantage and disadvantage or your opinion.
In the salad day, we can see it the current scenario which gives more importance to two things like marriage and career. However, there are both views pros and cons of marriage life and making career. The following paragraph would highlight my personal perspective along with an apt example.
I see eye to eye with the central idea for various reasons. First and foremost career plays the most important role in our day-to-day life. Nowadays some people have good job and business also, but some people are jobless. Moreover people work in interesting field which they like and make their goals in their life. Some of the person is only focusing on the career and they work hard in working time and they do not look about time and situation, so i would like to cite an example of Apple company's owner whose name is Steven jobs. He was focusing on his career and forgot his family members when he was working in company. He targeted his goal after some years he got success in his life and he become famous and great person.
On the logger's head, some critics go against the above discussed assertions. Firstly, india is a diverse country and every person are independent in their life. Some of the people can not understand their career, so they are trying become social animal in their life. They got married within age of 21 to 24 years because they know family is more important than others. For instant example, Paris government passed a law in this parliamentary board. If you are working in company and your company working time is 9:00 AM to 6:00 PM then you have attended your office time after you can leave company at 6'o clock and spend your quality time with your family and friends.
In conclusion, I personally believe that merits outnumber the demerits, however efforts should be made to minimize the latter one. We should focus on career and make our goals.
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- What do you think you, what is the most important in our life career or marriage??? Write in this essay advantage and disadvantage or your opinion. 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, so, then, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1548.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67673716012 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28177293131 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580060422961 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0270152105 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3888888889 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38888888889 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170972376143 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0487982594553 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516794696915 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0981497577596 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397158340082 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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