To what extend has the internet made life more convenient? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays, people try to find some ways to make their life more comfortable and easier. One of those ways is internet and with the advent of this service people come closer to their demands. Hence, the effect of internet on the comfort of people’s lives is undeniable.
One of the most important aspects of internet that has great impact on human’s life style is its availability. I mean that this service can help us anywhere any time and it does not have any limitation. By using a computer or a smart phone user can meet their needs easily through the internet. For instance, reading the newspaper from phones screen at home or buying or selling on stuck online even during the trip instead of waiting in long lines for a long time give this opportunity to users to make their life easier than past. More over the ability of the internet shows itself when people travel to new places and need some basic information. Not only can they do their flying activities such as purchasing ticket, check in or booking hotel, but also they have a chance to give some special information about the place that they will visit, like the price of museum, where is entertainment venues or some good restaurant that have a good reputation among individuals.
The second point worth mentioning about internet is its ability for workers who cannot go to work every day. For example, in these days due to Covid-19virus rapidly is spreading employers cannot go to their work place like past. Internet gives them this possibility to do their duty from home instead of going to work physically and also, they can attend conference with their managers too.in this situation, staffs can maintain their job position without risking their lives. Furthermore, some applications which work by internet such as banking applications make people’s life more comfortable. They do all their financial subjects through the internet without physical presence in banks or getting stuck in traffic.
At the conclusion, I believe that the comfortable life we have today depends on having the internet.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, second, so, for example, for instance, i mean, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1726.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94555873926 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61207750813 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567335243553 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.5715139662 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.066666667 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2666666667 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.93333333333 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130101686089 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0509817353688 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0219175968323 0.0667982634062 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0824099425706 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0203397661812 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.