At present mass media causes some threats which should impact on people's behavior and health. The main problems related with mass media are that it is easy to manipulate people's emotions adversely, and leading people to become less social; however, these matters could be tackled with some correct measurements.
Firstly, people's emotions could be manipulated easily. It is not secret that some radical societies can organize people's emotions by using mass media for special purposes. Especially, it works on young people, who are usually under 18 ages, can be triggered to do some dangerous attacks to ordinary people due to their belief, sexual orientation and political view. Thus, media is a vehicle for some special organizations to play with humans' feelings. Secondly, mass media decreasing people's face-to-face social skills. By spending array of hours on social network sites, people adapt to virtual relationships, so they could face various difficulties in their real connections. According to the researches carried out by Lion University in France, nowadays people feel more comfortable on social network than making relationships in their real life in comparison with people 20 years ago. This impacts on juvenile people based on the statistics by various scientific surveys.
Action is needed to be taken in order to combat these problems. It is true that one of the best ways preventing manipulation on people's emotions, is government control of the social media. Meanwhile, parents have to be more careful and attentive on their children's and teens' social activities. They can filter some websites to keep them away from some awful programs and emotions. In some countries government agencies try to prevent some terrible issues by implementing special identification requirements on websites, social network sites. In addition to this, people need to be more socialize as it was in past years. There could be more affordable social activities, sport competitions in the workplaces, schools and public parks. People lead to spend more time with each other and make new relationships.
In conclusion, even though mass media brings about dangerous problems such as manipulation of emotions and decrease on social skills, they could be overcome by taking some special measurements by governments and parents.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 390, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
...me awful programs and emotions. In some countries government agencies try to prevent some...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1969.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43922651934 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88226939719 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591160220994 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 601.2 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6474590404 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.631578947 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0526315789 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84210526316 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147603973418 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0507670067533 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531362269948 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110776819679 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457595467435 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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