In recent years, many people think that the amount of money they received is the most important part in making decision in choosing a job. In my opinion, I totally disagree with this idea because of some reasons such as knowledge, experiences and environment of a job.
In my point of view, the most important consideration when choosing a job is the experiences and the knowledge that could get from jobs. With most of jobs, the salary always goes with the amount of experiences and knowledge that the employees have. Therefore, it is reasonable when an intern or a trainee who lack of experiences have a low level of salary. In addition, by the time, employees also could have more opportunities and the chances to get higher level of salary due to the amount of value they could create when they more knowledge.
Moreover, the environment of the job is also a significant consideration that more important than salary in choosing a job. Relationships among people such as bosses with employees or the friendship with other colleagues could have large affections on the decision of jobs. Having a good working environment also have significant influences on the feelings of job satisfaction and the position they could reach in the future, rather than the money employees earned.
In conclusion, it is undeniable that salary is important when people choosing a job but I really believe that other factors such as experiences, knowledge and environment from a job is more important when making decision to get a job.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 2, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...experiences and environment of a job. In my point of view, the most important co...
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Line 2, column 143, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the jobs') or simply say ''most jobs''.
Suggestion: most of the jobs; most jobs
...nowledge that could get from jobs. With most of jobs, the salary always goes with the amount...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, really, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1267.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94921875 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92168438132 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 176.041082164 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.43359375 0.561755894193 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.7098178761 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.7 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.8 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269817453146 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12966870527 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108212119895 0.0667982634062 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190865079644 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0535354774416 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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